On Monday I received feedback on the following three images that I took...
The general feedback I got back was that the preferred edit was the last with a lens in the pupil with clogs cloned surrounding it. They liked how the eye seemed to look almost sleepy because of the tones and transparency used. There was also amount of coldness that they got from looking at the image, this works well as looking at some of the research images from artists such as Stelarc I also felt coldness from the reoccurring colours of silver and grey.
I also got some advice and where to go with further edits.
- look at the advancement of contact lenses as advancement of the eye
- Looking at the eye they could see I slight reflection, so they said maybe to edit a reflection that is noticeable by us, maybe reflecting the view of the world?
- Concentrate on either Eutopia or Dystopia
In the session some references were also mentioned...
- Dominic Elvin
- Black Mirror film displaying the take over by X Factor
- Edgar Alan Poe
- H.D Wells Time Machine
- Catherine Grant
- Rineke Dijkstra on Adolescence
- Jeurgen Teller
I will look at all this information in the days to come and have a go at some more edits that include a certain reflection of what the eye is seeing through the lens.
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