Feedback 13/2/12

Today I got feedback for my second set of edits, done on Photoshop. I wasn't pleased with this weeks edits due to the minimal message that they brought across. Here was what was said about the edits themselves:-

• lost message within edits, reflection not really thought through
• go back to trying some cut and paste try some cut and paste methods in order to gain some more ideas
• the eyes themselves were good choose because of their overall demeanour and tones- imitate the look of women advertisement campaigns in the way they are rather perfect looking

References mentioned I may look at-

• Big brother and idea of surveillance overtaking everyday lives
• Nietzsche
• Black Mirror 3rd episode
• Susan Bright
• Psychology on women portraits
• Angela McRobbie
• Camera as a weapon